I’m very curious about the symbol and the hints of the conspiracy, and I love that the protagonist is walking away from the situation-it heightens the sense that this is something very dangerous.
“The door between worlds.
The one that was meant to be shut.”
Those are the lines that really set the hook, for me. I’m looking forward to reading more!
Came here from The Lunar Award's "The Pitch", glad I did! I'm hooked
Thanks Maya! Glad you liked it!
Ooohhh hooked now!
I haven't finished yet but I like it so far. Do you want editing suggestions?
Always happy for feedback! If you'd like to send me a DM would love to chat.
Now this is good!
I'm looking forward to Chapter 2!!
I’m very curious about the symbol and the hints of the conspiracy, and I love that the protagonist is walking away from the situation-it heightens the sense that this is something very dangerous.
“The door between worlds.
The one that was meant to be shut.”
Those are the lines that really set the hook, for me. I’m looking forward to reading more!
Thanks for reading, Michael! Can't wait to share more
Great opening chapter! You drew me in from the beginning and then we had the cosmic switch. Nicely done
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it